Thor on 25/4/2010 at 21:23
Indeed, I agree with Phantom. Good read, lookin' professional, everyone's character differs the type of writing. Ghost is funniest to read, Sheam cares about every bit of detail and has that soft feel to it, Lytha likes some deeper thoughts occasionally etc.
I also resort to dictionary, though I'm overdoing it sometimes. Well, I'm not a native speaker, so it's good for my English.
Done with Chapter 2 btw. Hardly ever have a good enough mood to go through it in mondays to fridays.
Brian The Dog on 26/4/2010 at 15:54
Hey Digi, thanks for releasing it, it all looks good. I'd definitely still be interested in a book version when you've done it all
Digital Nightfall on 2/5/2010 at 19:34
Chapter 5, the first part of Book 2, is now online.
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http://cosas.ttlg.com/cot-r/cot-r_ch5.pdf) Chapter 5: Trapped
Preview:
Quote:
A heavy knock echoed through my chambers. I was jolted violently from my sleep, sitting bolt upright with a startled breath. My eyes quickly went to the door. I pushed myself from my bed, the wood creaking as I shifted my weight quickly and rose to my feet. My bedside candle flickered as I moved quickly by, making everything in the room seem to move with me.
I grabbed the brass handle of my door and yanked it quickly open. Light from another candle struck me in the face. Outside the door, framed in pitch blackness, stood two men; Jossimer and James's agent Othello whom I had met the other day on the stairs of Soulforge Cathedral. Jossimer stood behind him, holding aloft a large dripping candlestick, and the agent stood before him in silhouette against the light. Both were silent as I was handed a large bound scroll, bearing a broken Hammerite seal. I unrolled it quickly and ran my eyes over the page.
“Our scouts have returned from investigating the structure,” I whispered as I read, leaving the doorway and bidding the gentleman and my butler to enter. Jossimer went into my chamber and quickly busied himself tiding up some of my discarded clothing, and then moving to shut the windows before assuming a statue-like stillness by them, watching me. “Human remains beneath the floorboards,” I continued, “accursed work of evil...”
Dan on 3/5/2010 at 07:20
Oh yes! Its finally out:joke: A big "heart" to all involved!!! I will print this so I can read it on my terrace.
Digital Nightfall on 3/5/2010 at 18:49
Thanks, Dan, Brian, Thor, and Phantom. I hope you all are enjoying it, along with anyone who isn't posting. :)
It sounds like most people are still back on around Chapter 3?
Yandros on 4/5/2010 at 03:04
I'm still trying to find time to get started, Digi! :o I SOOO want to read this.
Digital Nightfall on 9/5/2010 at 06:04
<a href=http://cosas.ttlg.com/cot-r/cot-r_ch6.pdf?iframe=true&width=90%&height=90%">Chapter 6: Test of Fortitude</a> for your viewing pleasure!
I'm enjoying getting everyone's feedback on this, even the crits, so please keep it coming! Not to spoil or anything, but Chapter 6 is probably the most action-packed of the novel so far. :)
Quote:
“There has to be another way out,” I said, dreading the thought of what was going on upstairs.
“You can't just light a bit of wood on fire,” Foster said to Stephens condescendingly, trying to pull the burning stick away from him. “You need oil, and something to act as a wick.”
I tuned them out as they began to argue. I was locked down here with four strange men; some stranger than others. Realistically, I had to maintain a position of leadership, or we would all be doomed. “Who wants to stay here and who wants to help me look for a way out?” I asked.
Stephens stomped over after brushing off Foster's lecture, saying, “How do we know we can trust these two?” indicated to Els and Moody.
Moody spoke before I had a chance to. “How does she know she can trust
you two?” he gaffed.
Foster cut in, “Because we're soldiers of the Silver Gryphon, that's why! And what are
you—”
Els interrupted, stepping between Moody and Stephens. “
Quiet before you say something you regret, tin soldier!”
“Quiet!” I urged in a harsh whisper. “I hear something!”
They all instantly shut up and grew tense, casting wary eyes in the direction of the closed hatch far above. A moment went by. Finally Foster said, “I don't hear anything.”
“Sorry,” I told him. “It must have been the sound of four
fools arguing with each other!”
Ghost on 11/5/2010 at 00:03
Quote Posted by Jyre
Goodies to read!
Just thought I'd pop in, say hello, and mysteriously vanish into the shadows for another year or three :ebil:
Oh no! Jyres still lurking around too! *waves*
and thanks Thor, i tried to be the comic relief of the story, a lot of the other parts got kind of deep and dark at points.
Thor on 11/5/2010 at 13:58
Hehe, good to see some of the "originals" around. :)
I really wish I could read this story, but I just have so much other stuff to read and worry about... meh. Worst May ever.
Btw, I guess this thing will be fully released in a little under 18 weeks, which is... 4 months and ~10 days. September will be nearing the end. Hm... not sure if I had a point, I just thought it would be cool to finish it within summer, but then again September shouldn't be a bad month anyway.
Jyre on 13/5/2010 at 23:45
Quote Posted by Ghost
Oh no! Jyres still lurking around too! *waves*
and thanks Thor, i tried to be the comic relief of the story, a lot of the other parts got kind of deep and dark at points.
Cursed!
Umm, I mean, Hello! *waves*