Pitch on 4/12/2005 at 22:32
That's fine with me.
Fig455 on 5/12/2005 at 03:18
even if it stunk (which it doesn't), it would be hard to give negative feedback on something that took that much thought and effort. Good job.
Esme on 16/12/2005 at 16:57
Sorry for the delay, I've been buried ... well not literally but you know what I mean ... buried with work, christmas stuff and some taffin bug thats trying to kill me by drowning me in my own mucous or make me cough my lungs up
Will get this sorted soon
Esme on 9/3/2006 at 17:31
Sorry this is taking a long time, life keeps interfering, I've just about sorted the first third of it to say roughly what I want it to and it's around 4,500 words, it still needs work but if I keep revising it I'll never get the rest done.
If anyone fancies a quick read through and telling me whats wrong with it let me know ;)
