Sulphur on 11/11/2012 at 20:08
If you need help with the writing, I can offer you some assistance when the time comes.
Yakoob on 11/11/2012 at 22:39
Yea I could probably use an extra hand soon, even if just for a second-opinion or edits. Not to sound pompous, but do you have any samples of game (or any other really) writing I could have a quick look at :p
Sulphur on 12/11/2012 at 20:30
There would be more if they made a sequel to Orca. :erg:
Sorry, 'koob: samples of my serious writing are from, like, 8 years ago. The less serious ones are (
http://www.ttlg.com/forums/showthread.php?t=127211&p=1892631&viewfull=1#post1892631) more recent. I'm not as predisposed towards adjective abuse as, say, Dan Brown any more, so I've probably improved a little. I think. Most of the time I write something, it ends up here anyway. You lot have been reading it for a while.
Yakoob on 13/11/2012 at 02:45
Well no worries, I was just curious; you certainely seem literate if TTLG posts are any indication :joke: I'll contact you when the time comes :)
Al_B on 13/11/2012 at 06:27
Quote Posted by Yakoob
certainely seem literate
Forum rule 768: When commenting on grammar, spelling or literacy you're
guaranteed to make a spelling mistook somewhere in your reply.
Yakoob on 21/11/2012 at 22:38
Well I have finished typing up all the "written infodumps" for my game like books, articles, magazines, etc. Right now they do verge a bit of on the wall-o-text side of things, but its sufficient for the "beta" stage of text stuff. I definitely need to make it more interesting, though, like show-don't-tell kind of a way; but that's when future editors will hopefully help with too. Here's a sneak peek of a more interesting bit:
Inline Image:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v474/Koobazaur/Late/SMD07_pamphlet.jpgnext, I need to finish typing up the conversations (unnngghhh) and do a few more feature tweaks, and I can officially announce a "beta" and start recruiting writers/artists/composers! Yeeee!
june gloom on 22/11/2012 at 04:49
the fuck is an oldager
Yakoob on 23/11/2012 at 00:02
And to find that out, you'll need to play the game :cheeky: